I can't see why you name it lets stfu (assuming, of course, stfu still means 'shut the fuck up'... if they meaning changed, I didn't get the memo)...
I don't understand why a lot of the people here don't take instruments from albums and substitute them for the midi instruments... an actual string instrument for the main tune would carry so much better... there would be more body to it... I mean, its already interesting and held my ear for the full play through (which is hard to do... I only review the tracks I like)...
If I could make a suggestion... sample an actual electric violin with very mild distortion for that... even if you just get one note and up/down sample it for the whole tune... I think you would like the results.